Showing posts with label novella. Show all posts
Showing posts with label novella. Show all posts

Wednesday, August 13, 2014

Blessed are the Peacemaker​s: A Shattered Nation Novella

Guest post Jeffrey Evan Brooks.

Most alternate history stories dealing with the American Civil War focus on specific military events.  We like to focus on the nitty-gritty details of individual battles, imagining what might have happened if John Reynolds had been just a little late on the first day at Gettysburg, if Benjamin Cheatham had blocked the Columbia Pike at Spring Hill, or any number of other counterfactual scenarios.  These questions are a great deal of fun. They also serve to remind us just how easily history could have been very different.

In most Civil War alternate history fiction, the story ends when the fighting ends. Less common are counterfactual tales that explore how the world would have been different in the aftermath of a different outcome to the conflict.  Once the bullets stop flying and the long-term “butterflies” need to be considered, constructing an imaginary alternate history becomes much more difficult.  In these stories, the end of the war marks the beginning, rather than the conclusion, of the real story.  If we envision the Civil War ending differently, usually with an independent Confederacy, we have to stretch our imaginations to cover another century-and-a-half.  We have to ask ourselves what an independent Confederacy would have meant for slavery and long-term race relations, the balance of power on the global stage, and daily life in both North and South.  What would have been the postwar relationship between the Union and the Confederacy?  How would the Confederate and Union economies be different than they were historically?  If one really puts his mind to it, one could even try to imagine how music, art, and literature would be different.

When I wrote Shattered Nation: An Alternate History Novel of the American Civil War, I knew I wanted to take the story beyond the end of the war and explore what an independent Confederacy would have meant for the subsequent history of both America and the wider world.  That exercise in imagination started last month, when I published Blessed are the Peacemakers: A Shattered Nation Novella.

Had the Confederacy succeeded in establishing its independence, it makes sense to assume that the war would have ended in the traditional manner: a peace conference between representatives of the two governments.  Blessed are the Peacemakers brings readers to that conference, which takes place on neutral ground in Canada.  Readers watch events unfold through the eyes of John C. Breckinridge, former Vice President of the United States and successful Southern general, who is now serving as a Confederate delegate to the peace talks.

In my opinion, there were only two realistic possibilities for a Southern victory in the American Civil War. The first was a better showing by the Confederacy in 1861-62, leading to European recognition of the Confederacy.  The other would be outlasting the Union and inflicting such heavy losses upon it that a “peace through exhaustion” occurs in 1864, with Lincoln being ousted from the White House by Northern voters. Shattered Nation explores the latter scenario, the point of divergence being Joseph Johnston remaining in command of the Army of Tennessee and winning a tremendous victory over Sherman at the Battle of Peachtree Creek.

This is a critical point, for a Confederate victory scenario in 1864 is vastly different than a Confederate victory scenario in 1862.  Most important of all is the fact that the Emancipation Proclamation took effect on January 1, 1863, making the abolition of slavery a Union war aim and beginning the process of freeing huge numbers of slaves.  By mid-1864, hundreds of thousands of slaves had been set free and many thousands had joined the Union army.  Aside from slavery, the two years between 1862 and 1864 saw greater centralization of authority in Richmond at the expense of the Confederate state governments, a greater harshness and brutality introduced into the war on both sides, and a realization that America as it had been could never be restored, no matter who won the war.  Keeping this in mind was crucial in framing the attitudes of the characters who made up the convention delegates.

As I began writing, I asked myself what the most divisive issues at such a peace conference would be. Some were obvious.  How would the armies disengage?  Where would the border between the two nations lie? Since, in the Shattered Nation timeline, the Confederate victory takes place after the Emancipation Proclamation has been enacted, how would the delegates approach the subject of the thousands upon thousands of slaves freed by it?

As I wrote, issues that would have seemed minor and technical from the perspective of history, but which would have been vitally important to the participants at the time, kept popping into my head.  Some occurred to me while following news of the Scottish independence referendum campaign in the United Kingdom, which can be viewed as a test case for two countries splitting apart.  Others popped into my head simply by doing thought experiments.  If I was a Union or Confederate peace delegate sitting at that table, what would I have demanded and expected to get?  I also bounced ideas off of my fellow posters in the discussion forum at AlternateHistory.com, getting lots of very useful feedback.

As part of my research, I began pouring over the text of treaties from the eighteenth and nineteenth centuries. The idea then occurred to me to write out an actual treaty, which could be included at the end of the novella as an appendix to the story.  It was a fun experience, though I imagine most people would find it boring. Such is the quirky life of the history-obsessed.

I was excited to write John C. Breckinridge as a character.  I deliberately left him out of Shattered Nation (aside from a very brief cameo near the end), because I wanted to use him as a major character in later writings.  I have always felt that he is one of the least appreciated figures of American Civil War.  He played a crucial role in the political events before 1861 and he became one of the outstanding generals on either side who had had no prewar military training.  As a Kentuckian, he had a unique ability to see the war from the perspective of each side.  Few men encapsulate the American Civil War, in all its tragedy and drama, as well as John C. Breckinridge.  We’ll be seeing more of him in future Shattered Nation books.

Blessed are the Peacemakers is intended to serve as a bridge between Shattered Nation and its sequel, House of the Proud, which is about a third of the way to completion and which I hope to publish in 2015. I’m excited about the future course the Shattered Nation series will be taking.  I am doing preliminary research and outlining for future novels that will take the alternate timeline up to the 1960s, as well as some that take place during the Civil War in regions other than Georgia.  There will also be more novellas like Blessed are the Peacemakers, including one that explores the postwar life of Abraham Lincoln.

I’m quite proud of Blessed are the Peacemakers and hope that the alternate history community enjoys it. Now, on to the next book!

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Jeffrey Evan Brooks is the author of Shattered Nation: An Alternate History Novel of the American Civil War.

Thursday, July 11, 2013

Review: Adrift on the Sea of Rains by Ian Sales

My goal of posting a review for all of the 2012 Sidewise nominated works this year got a huge shot in the arm when author Ian Sales was kind enough to contact me and send me a copy of his novella "Adrift on the Sea of Rains", the first book in the Apollo Quartet. I finished the story, published under Sale's Whippleshield Books (a small press focusing exclusively on hard SF), the day I received it and have finally sat down to write this review after mulling it over during the week.

How did I like it? Well let me answer that question by telling you what I think of most self-published and small press books. General rule of thumb: you have to wade through a lot of garbage to find those few excellent stories. Thankfully for me, "Adrift on the Sea of Rains" is one of those few excellent stories.

The story follows nine doomed astronauts from the point of view of their commander, Vance Peterson, after they are left stranded on their Lunar base when the Earth is rendered lifeless by nuclear war. Their only hope is a Nazi wunderwaffe sent to the Moon at the last minute as tensions increased on Earth. This "torsion field generator" (nicknamed "The Bell" and seen before in SecondWorld by Jeremy Robinson) could find them a living Earth by transporting the Moon to a parallel dimension. This small glimmer of hope disappears, however, as they continue to encounter an endless stream of dead Earths.

I don't want to give too much away, since this is a novella and does not leave room for minor spoilers as longer novels do. I can say that Ian successfully managed to us poetic prose usually found in the literary genre to tell this hard science fiction tragedy. The ending is just as bleak as the Lunar landscape, but probably not in the way you are imagining. Despite the horrors that occurred in this story's universe, it is the human condition itself that takes center stage. Questions of free will and logic are thrown out the window when you are faced with utter hopelessness.

There were some moments where the scientific jargon and alphabet soup Ian throws at the reader becomes a little overwhelming, although there is a handy-dandy glossary in the back along with a nifty timeline about the Apollo missions in this timeline where the United States continued their exploration of the Moon even as the military took increasing control while the world's superpowers readied for war. Some reviews I read didn't appreciate these appendixes, but I think most alternate historians will enjoy the back story.

It goes without saying that "Adrift on the Sea of Rains" is a well-researched novella. In fact the amount of research done according to bibliography at the end is staggering. Although Ian does work in some more fantastical elements, it does not hamper the novella, but instead supports the theme (which is very apparent in the sequel) of characters in more advanced timelines feeling they are living through science fiction. More importantly, the story represents two things I wish more alternate historians would do. First, use more real science in their alternate history and, second, write more alternate histories about the space race.

So it goes without saying that "Adrift on the Sea of Rains" surely deserves the nomination for the Sidewise and will no doubt be a strong contender. In the meantime, check out Amazing Stories Tuesday where I will be posting the review of the sequel "The Eye With Which The Universe Beholds Itself" and we might even see an interview with Ian in the near future.

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Matt Mitrovich is the founder and editor of Alternate History Weekly Update and a blogger on Amazing Stories. His new story "The Enchanted Bean" can be found in Once Upon a Clockwork Tale from Echelon Press. When not writing he works as an attorney, enjoys life with his beautiful wife Alana and prepares for the inevitable zombie apocalypse. You can follow him on Facebook or Twitter.

Thursday, June 28, 2012

Review: "Vampire Romance" by Kim Newman

Grade: B+
Like many men who have a significant other that enjoys the Twilight franchise, I have been subjected to what counts as "vampire romance" in this day of age.  Despite the RiffTrax commentary that I plug into, I have been unable to escape the sheer banality of it.  So you can guess how happy I was when I found out that Kim Newman decided to take a stake to the recent trends in vampire fiction.  What he gave us is an amusing mystery with some social commentary.

Published in the new, Titan Books printing of The Bloody Red Baron, "Vampire Romance" is set in 1923.  The Central Power have been defeated and Dracula has been exiled to an island where the sun never sets.  This has left a power vacuum in the vampire community.  Elders gather at Mildew Manor to pick the next "King of the Cats", but the Diogenes club would rather the position remain empty.  They have tasked their agent Edwin Winthrop to recruit Geneviève Dieudonné and have her pose as a claimant to observe the proceedings and what influence the costumed criminal "Crook" has on the next vampire king.  If his choice gets elected it could make his criminal organization (and nascent political movement that has similarities with the anti-vampire Nazis in Germany) a threat to the Empire.  Of course all this backroom dealings means nothing to the resident vampire-loving, teenage girl who is convinced that one of the vampires present is her soul mate from a past life.  Add an unexpected murder, a Japanese schoolgirl vampire and an ancient dictator and you got yourself a novella.

The story was very funny and I enjoyed Newman's response to the hunky vampires of the 21st century.  To me Newman's vampires are more realistic then what you usually find in fiction.  Despite their immortality and powers, they are still human.  They can be petty, stupid and vicious...but also loyal, intelligent and reasonable.  The twist at the end when the killer is revealed is also a nice touch, but the entire story probably should have been published outside of The Bloody Red Baron.  After reading about an elder American vampire turning into mist so he could enter a German tank and slaughter its crew only to be incinerated by a giant flame thrower, the more humorous (even if dark) "Vampire Romance" did not mesh with the horror present in the novel that preceded it.  The beginning chapter where Geneviève gets a haircut probably could have been shorter, even if it did set the scene.

Despite some small issues, "Vampire Romances" was a delightful commentary on how horror is presented to the masses and if you do get a copy of the Titan Books printing of The Bloody Red Baron then I recommend that you keep reading into 1923.

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Matt Mitrovich is the founder and editor of Alternate History Weekly Update, a volunteer editor for Alt Hist and a contributor to Just Below the Law. His fiction can be found at Echelon PressJake's Monthly and his own writing blog. When not writing he works as an attorney and enjoys life with his beautiful wife Alana.