Showing posts with label The Visitor. Show all posts
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Thursday, June 14, 2012

Review: "A New Birth of Freedom: The Visitor" by Robert G. Pielke

Grade: B

Would you believe someone if they told you they were a time traveler?  Probably not, you are not that trusting of a soul.  You would require some proof.  What could they say or do to convince you that they are the real deal?  But wait, why is it so important that you believe them?  What do they want from you?

A New Birth of Freedom: The Visitor by Robert G. Pielke begins when a stranger carrying a shiny, metallic valise steps aboard a train carrying a young Abraham Lincoln going home from a two year stint in Congress.  He is dressed oddly and has an unusual request of Lincoln.  He asks Lincoln to be his attorney and to remain on retainer...for 14 years.  Time flies by and Lincoln, now President of a divided nation, meets the stranger again who goes by the name of Edwin Blair.

He proceeds to inform Lincoln and his closest advisers that he is a time traveler and he is here to save the world.  He does not need much, just the Army of the Potomac, on the verge of fighting Lee and the Army of Northern Virginia at Gettysburg, to be in a certain place at a certain time to fight one of the greatest threats to humanity.

Oops, I almost forgot.  He also needs Lee and the Confederates to cooperate as well.  Piece of cake really.

A New Birth of Freedom was a good read.  The book is definitely dialogue driven, much like The Lost Fleet series by Jack Campbell.  The period dialogue and Edwin's clumsy attempts to emulate it were fun to read.  Pielke also does a good job of making a plausible presentation of Civil War America and more importantly avoids common time travel tropes that are found in alternate history.

How so? First, Blair isn't some bumbling fool who got sent back in time by accident.  He has a well-thought out plan that has been carried out over a period of decades and will come to fruition on the bloody fields of Gettysburg.  Second, and most refreshing, is the fact that the historical characters that Blair meets are not dumb barbarians overly-impressed by Blair's "magic".  They have imaginations too and sometimes prove morally superior when Blair succumbs to his darker aspects.

Of course there is the issue of the butterfly effect, which seems to have been suspended.  I will withhold judgment, however, since how time travel works in the novel is not sufficiently explained and will likely be expanded upon in the sequels.  I am starting to learn that you should not always assume the author screwed up and there could be more to the story in later volumes.  Sometimes you need to sit back and give the author the benefit of the doubt.

Nevertheless there were three major issues which prevented me from giving this novel a better grade. One, the length.  The novel is just over 200 pages long, including a few sketches.  It is a very short read.  Two, you can only buy the novel in paperback, which is annoying for e-book fans like me.  Three, typos.  At first I was worried when I started reading this book and noticed there was an error in the first sentence of the introduction. Thankfully, however, there were not enough errors to completely ruin the novel.

A New Birth of Freedom: The Visitor is a worthwhile read.  Hopefully the sequels will correct the flaws of the original and create an excellent time travel series.

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Matt Mitrovich is the founder and editor of Alternate History Weekly Update, a volunteer editor for the Alt Hist magazine and a contributor to Just Below the Law. One of his short stories will be published in the upcoming Echelon Press anthology, Once Upon a Clockwork Tale (2013). When not writing he works as an attorney in the state of Illinois and enjoys life with his beautiful wife Alana.

Tuesday, June 5, 2012

Preview: "A New Birth of Freedom: The Visitor" by Robert G. Pielke

How do you get two warring factions to put aside their differences and unite against a common enemy?  If you are Harry Harrison, you get the British to attack the Confederates after going to war on their side to fight the Union.  If you are Harry Turtledove, you have aliens invade the Earth at the height of World War II.  Take the influences of both authors and you get A New Birth of Freedom: The Visitor by Robert G. Pielke, the first in a planned trilogy, with the last two books to be published by Whiskey Creek Press.  Here is the description from  Amazon:

It has taken centuries to recognize that all humans possess certain unalienable rights. There will come a time when we have to consider whether others deserve those rights as well. That time will come on July 3rd 1863. 
When a stranger carrying a shiny, metallic valise steps aboard a train carrying Abraham Lincoln home from a 2 year stint in Congress, everyone stares, wondering about the stranger's odd clothing and strange footwear with the word Nike emblazoned on them. 
When the strange man shows up in Lincoln's office at the White House 14 years later, still wearing the same clothes, carrying the same valise and looking not a day older, the president and his staff know something is odd. 
But when Edwin Blair opens his valise and projects a 3D image of the Earth on Lincoln's wall, then proceeds to tell a fanciful tale about time traveling aliens preparing to land at Gettysburg on July 3rd, they are sure they've met a lunatic.  
Unfortunately for them, they're wrong. 

Robert has been kind enough to send me a review copy to read. Though you will have to wait for my review next week, in the meantime you can check out reviews done by other critics.  Lynn McMonigal said that she "LOVED this book" and also liked the "attention to detail. Historical figures such as Abraham Lincoln and Robert E. Lee are described just as history books portray them."  Chew & Digest Books also complimented Pielke on how he portrayed historical figures saying "[w]hen Lincoln talks, it sounds like what I think Lincoln would say. When Robert E. Lee interacts with Blair, it feels real, not like total poppycock." Kirkus Reviews said that A New Birth of Freedom was "[a]n exciting, enticing first entry in a planned series."

One of the cons of the novel that a couple of the reviews agreed about was the presence of the sci-fi elements in the story.  Yet as alternate historians, a little ASB is unlikely to scare us away.  I look forward to reading and reviewing the story, so stay tuned.

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Matt Mitrovich is the founder and editor of Alternate History Weekly Update, a volunteer editor for the Alt Hist magazine and a contributor to Just Below the Law. One of his short stories will be published in the upcoming Echelon Press anthology, Once Upon a Clockwork Tale (2013). When not writing he works as an attorney in the state of Illinois and enjoys life with his beautiful wife Alana.